Lali

Un-Censored & Un-Ashamed

If I could escape September 6, 2007

Filed under: Creative Writing — Lali: Un-Censored & Un-Ashamed @ 10:14 am

If I could escape
I’d run to you until my legs gave in
and together we’d commit every single carnal sin.
After that,
I would turn myself in,
Only to escape again…
to you.

 

5 Responses to “If I could escape”

  1. Styx n' Stonz Says:

    This is HOT! How ’bout you run to me??!!
    Just kidding! (Sort of.) ;-)

  2. Ana R. Says:

    First time reader of your blog and I’m hooked. You have such a delicate yet bold way of expressing yourself.
    You officially have a new fan from across the pond.
    Cheers Lali,

    Ana

  3. .dale. Says:

    hey, i just looked at your blog for the first time…sorry.

    this is brilliant, lali, i just love this. so powerful, so true.

    i know who you’re talking about, too, and i hope it stays that way forever with you two.

    best.

    dale

  4. Lee Says:

    Very nice Lali.

  5. Carla Says:

    I have read once and another time… and since Im not an English person (but Portuguese) I just understood what u meant today… To love somebody to that point… is something we unfortunately don’t live everyday… I know that cause I had also a great boyfriend which I truly loved… and hope he would be with me… at least on my thoughts… so that I could “turn myself in,
    Only to escape again…
    to you.”

    Great Lali… keep up… cause I really love your writing


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